prettyful well done on the coloring

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nice cloring

she's very pretty. I like the whole concept fo this pic! Its getting meh more exccited for they story!!

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she's so pretty! I love the colors

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Very swqeety glance, so inocent and cute! Loved the green eyes ^^

Her face is adorable. There an an interesting use of color especially the yellow on her skin tone. I like watercolors where the strokes are visible.

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love the colorings
and the proportions are all so good
I'm bad at it..so ya
the whole pic is awesomeness ^ ^

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You asked for a critique at the Artistist's Hospital, so I'm here to drop you a line.

Firstly, her breasts have an unnatural look to them - particularly her left breast which is lopsided. Drawing breasts is often much more difficult than they may seem (-after all, they're 'just ovals'. I would suggest finding a good reference picture and matching it up to that. Additionally, compile references - whether that means artistic nudes on dA or Playboy issues, that's up to you.

Secondly, the linework is a bit messy - lines that should be smooth (-such as her shoulder), have wiggles. You can fix that up with Photoshop, or perhaps take your time when doing the lineart to avoid such happenings.

Lastly, you need to be more consistent with lighting and shading. It seems that the lightsource is somewhere in the upper left side of the drawing, as such, her lower extremities should be darker - and her large breasts would definitely be casting a shadow on her body, along with her necklace.

Hope that helps a bit for your next drawing.

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Thank you so much for the critque. This will help me a whole lot next time.

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